My Best friend
I have a friend his name is Mohamed . We have been classmates from elementary school untill high school . The frist time i met him he made problems with me . After one month we became frends with each other. I like to stay with him alot beacuse he is smarter than me . We stayde together through out high school .He caused problems with me because went out doring a holiday in anther city .We want to clabs and spent all my mony in the club . After the club finished we had to go back to the hotel .We didn't have car , so we had to take a taxi . I asked my friend if he has money , and he told me no . I told him okey we have to walk ,so next. We had to walk back for half and hour to the hotel . On the way back to the hotel he said he wants to buy a pack of cigerettes . So i told him you said you do not have money . Now i stared to get angry with him beacuse of what he did , and we contact eachother any more since then

2 Comments:
This is a good first post. Your paragraph is a good example of narration. You tell the story of how your friendship with Mohamed ended, which is a good narrative.
If you wrote a descriptive paragraph, you would tell us what Mohamed looks like. Is he tall or short, does he have long hair, short hair, straight hair, wavy hair, or curly hair? What kinds of clothes does he wear?
Also, you will have to work on your spelling. For example, the word "anther" should be "another", and "frist" should be "first."
HOW DO YOU LIKE LEAVING HERE IN THE UNITED STTAES AND MAKING NEW FRIENDS FROM DIFFERNET COUNTRIES.
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